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Feedback gained on my presentation for a new UK film.


https://youtu.be/iVrV1vn_tvQ

One part of the feedback I got on my presentation, was that it would be better if I hire an actor who is quite well known to star in the movie, in order to entice more people to watch it. This is because before, there was going to be no well known actors in it, everyone was going to be unheard of. The well known actor would make the movie more successful, as some people just watch movies because their favourite actor is in it and it also makes the movie look more professional. An actor like Ashley Walters would fit best for the role as Tristan, as he is a well known actor in uk movies similar to this one and fits the role as Tristan perfectly. 

In the feedback, it was made clear that there were too many male characters in the cast, or just not enough attention on the existing female characters. To fix this, I am going to add another female to the movie, in particular Jacks girlfriend. This gives the movie another key female character that Jack's story effects personally. 

In my presentation, they liked the point I was trying to get across with this movie. It is to highlight how easy it is for young working class males to go down the path of crime. It also highlights the effects it has on the kids themselves, and the families and friends of these kids. As they liked this point, I am going to make sure that it is clear to the audience what I'm trying to show when they watch it. This is because it is a social conscience. 

Summary 

I think that my presentation went well, and I got all the points and ideas about it across quite well. There were not too many things that were said about changing things in the movie, only little things were highlighted. So overall,I think that i did quite a good job with what i did, and i am aware of how to make the movie even better now.